EMP presentation

I was anticipating this presentation with the tutors, I was finally looking forward to voicing my idea on the concept that underpins my the new brief. 

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This presentation encompasses what i want to do with this brief. I had some interesting feedback that I will keep in mind when progressing with the brief. 

The presentation was set out so that everyone i was presenting had a separate sheet to write on to give each-other feedback.  

Here was some of the useful feedback I received (four sections of feedback):

Presentation clarity- Clear and strong idea

Concept quality- Interesting project    

                      - Unique and a worth while cause 

      - A nice way to explore mental health 

      - Solid idea and nice to visit a charity

     -  I like that you have a specific audience 

Link with aims-  Very clear 

    -  Links well 

    -  An area that I can explore my previous knowledge and develop 

 

Development suggestions- 

Try print with different flowers. See if the flowers trigger any thoughts/ memories. Hand portraits, flower in hand. Look at artist who paints of hands. Keep on with your doing, more research! Research on the charity and mental health. 

 

I will keep all these constructive suggestions in mind. I have found this experience very helpful, the use of the kind of feedback has offered me more opinions which makes me feel more confident about my concept.