EMP- Feedback tutorial

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23^rd Feb tutorials-

Group tutorial presentation, I have produced a presentation to show the class showcasing my idea. I made this presentation into 5 slides; these slides consist of three slides explaining what I plan to do.

1^st- Why maps?

2^nd- How, travel journal?

3^rd- My progression so far

 I have described how I what I want to focus and what I have done so far, but I have yet to decide what I want to achieve from it.

 Here are my written feed back slips, spilt into three sections, clarity, and concept quality and development suggestions.

 Clarity: Very clear, nice solid idea, you are here, really clear, clear, understandable, interesting, tick, clear presentation and idea very solid.

Concept quality: interesting project, yes keep exploring and research, very clear, links well explore way finding, How will you tell the story? Fits well, the idea has developed a lot, lots of experimentation very good.

 Development suggestions: Change media every time birdie visits a different place, I think you’ve done all the right research so just keep building on it. Research and experiment to help with solutions and ideas, Maybe look at geotagging and wined magazine, With all the information you have you could maybe create an archive, Look at Lord of the Rings – middle earth maps, Check out the Jolly postman – child book, See how people navigate and hoe how they could leave trails.

 I have found this tutorial very eye opening and made me consider loads of different options.