Written feed back:
First feed back on book, I made over the Easter!
They really loved it and that I should only make small adjustments to improve the layout and quality, constructive feedback below.
How to be an explorer- increase leading (between rows of words)
Hike range left, drop down text ‘is’ (soft return) page 3
Headgistbury Head font- reconsider
Drop ‘shared’ on page 4
Make bold ‘be considerate’ page 6
Add a little compass to the book, on page 8
Double check the difficulty dots on each maps, specify what they mean
Look at illustration on page 18, fill in bird’s foot white
In research show research of songs used for the inspiring posters
Ethnic and social issues, make sure you address these- my work encouraging caring for the countryside
Make sure your make it very obvious you recognise the writers of the two books I am being influenced by
Kestrel illustration bring information surrounding down, so ‘moustache’ is on its own- page 28
Idea for display book, make chapters- showing a dotted line to show progress
I will take on all of this valuable construtive suggestions! Next time the tutors lay their eyes on my project I will .
I will take on this valuable constructive suggestions to furture improve the quailty of my work.
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