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13th April tutorials (tutor Sally) 
Written feed back:
I have shown all of my work to Kit and made amended all of the typing errors and suggestions to my final document. I now want to show my work to different tutors to get further constructive suggestions.
Dots are to heavy, on the contents page, change the dotted line to white?
Relook at the Hengistbury leading (between the letters)
Maybe extend the images
Keep illustration style, successful all the way through
Watch ‘Pirates’ the film, reminds them of the same colours and approach to mapping, add detailing
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